Thursday, July 22, 2010

7- Im going to kill you

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"WHAT IS SHE THINKING" I yelled as Val drove over to Jon's and Hannah's house.

"I mean, its very evident he loves her so much, and I don't know what her problem is"

I've never been mad at Hannah. Irritated, never mad. But this had really upset me. I had to drag myself out of my bliss, and talk her into say yes. I knew she loved him so much. I knew her answer was caused by nervousness, stress, moodiness, and well pregnancy.

"Babe, maybe there's something else wrong" Val said driving as fast he can to their house.

"no, her and Jon have been together for 3 years now, she had to expect sooner or later"
"Babe, lets give her the benefit of the doubt, maybe she has a good reason"

When we got to the house, the garage was open, and Jon's SUV was no where to be found.

I walked in there with such a purpose. I was livid. Hannah and I have done some stupid stuff. But this had to be at the top of the list. All the way up there with her and I streaking through Hockey camp which I eventually got sent home for making out with one of guy campers. I was never a good girl.

"Hannah, where are you?!?!" I yelled in her
"In here" She yelled from the family room.

I walked in, she had a carton of ice cream, and the movie Jerry Maguire on. That were her comfort food and movie. I knew it couldn't be good, if she had those out.

It was about the time when Renee Zellweger tells Tom Cruise "You had me at hello". I looked at Hannah, and she was wiping tears away from her cheek. She was a sucker for Tom Cruise. I knew this wasn't going to be easy. I leaned over and turned off the TV, and grabbed the ice cream from her hands.

"Hey, haven't you heard it isn't good to take food from a pregnant women"
I looked around her, she was surrounded by junk food. Candy, ice cream, chips, pop. All kinds of stuff not good for her.

"You had sex" she said looking at my face, and had this smirk.

"How do you know" I said.
"Rebekah, I know your just got laid face, you have an unnatural glow, and your hair is messed up, and you look a little tired"

"Whatever, this stuff is terrible for you and the baby" I said trying to change the subject, as I picked up, pop cans, chip bags, and wrappers.
"what is going on" I asked going into the kitchen and throwing it away.

"why, are you eating all this junk" I said as Val sat far from the both of us.

"I don't know I was hungry, why are you acting like my mom" Hannah spat back at me.

"because Hannah, your going to be a mom in 7 months, you cant continue acting like this"

"acting like what?" she asked getting pissed at me.

I took a deep breath, think of the words to use when your yelling at a moody pregnant women.

"Huh, Rebekah? acting Immature" She said.

"yes, your acting like your 18, your going to be 24 soon, and well you cant do this. Where's Jon" I asked.

"I don't know, He left after we had a semi huge fight, about well the engagement" She said getting up to go the kitchen.

I dialed Jon's cell, to see where he was. And just like I thought he didn't answer.

"Val, do you think you could find Jon for me" I asked as Val had this uncomfortable look on his face. Val hated confrontation

"No, No, I don't want him here" She said yelling.

"You may not want him, but he needs to be here" I said.

"Yeah sure babe, I have a good feeling where he is" He said as he came over to give me a kiss. And left.

"So was he any good" Hannah asked

"What?" I said confused trying to pick up the remaining mess.

"Val, you evidently had sex, so was he any good" she said walking back into the room.

"Hannah, this isn't about me, this is about you, whats going on?"
"I don't know what your talking about"She said trying to ignore what I was asking.

"come on, why did you say no, you love him, and he loves you to the point he's willing to clean up his mess to make you happy"

"Rebekah, he's only proposing because I'm pregnant"

"Seriously Hannah,you cant seriously believe that, you guys have been together for 3 years, you had to be expecting it for some time. You showed him a ring you like"

"I just feel that its happening to fast, after I have this baby my life is over, no more going out with the team, no more trips, no more anything. And I don't want his proposal to because of me being pregnant"

"Your right, your priorities will change, and well would you rather raise this baby alone, or well have Jon, who will be a amazing father, to help you"

She stared at the ground, and fiddle with her shirt. "He loves you, he did anything and everything to get that huge ring for you"

She looked at me funny. "What do you mean""

"he went back to that jewelry store in Birmingham, and well they didn't have it on hand, so he had to order it and well it cost him a lot"

"O" was all Hannah could say.

"wants to make you happy, and he knows, this baby is well a bump in the road to your happiness, but Hannah, hes willing to try his hardest to make a happy home for you and this baby"

"what if I'm a terrible wife, I'm only 23, I'm so young"

Val's POV

As I drove fast to where Jon usually goes to blow some steam. I knew Jon loved Hannah with every bit of his heart. When he first came to Detroit, all he could talk about was how his girlfriend Hannah was moving from Ontario, to be with him. And how she was perfect, and how gorgeous she was, or how good of a cook she was. It got a little annoying to hear about this girl, but when she came, I saw how happy she made him. I finally didn't realize how happy he felt until I met Rebekah. I couldn't let a relationship of 3 years go down the drain, I had to help Rebekah get them back together.

As I pulled up to the park, where I found a tall black figure standing at this bridge that went across this little river. He was just standing there staring into stars. It was pretty dark, you could see all the stars. I'll have to bring Rebekah here.

As I walked closer, I saw his profile of his face. Jon always came here when he was well troubled, confused, or had a terrible game. It was his happy place. Like my was my secluded beach, his was this bridge.

"Hey" I said as I stood next to him.

"Hey man"

I just stared at the little river as it was frozen over.

"whats up" he asked not taking his eyes off the stars.

"nothing, just had strict orders to come and find you"

He smiled"from Bek"

"yes and she me told not to return with out you"

"I'm guessing you already heard what happened"
"Yes"
"I don't know what happened, one minute I'm laying in bed with her, well after we "

I just nodded know what he was talking about it.

"and well I slipped the ring on her finger as she cuddle up to me, and she was like whats this, and I said a engagement ring, Hannah will you marry me, then she looked me in the eyes and said "No""

I could hear it in his voice, he was deeply hurt. "I don't know what I did, I mean , what do I have to do to make her say yes, she's the only person I can see raising my kids with, and growing old with"

"maybe she's scared"

"Scared of what" he asked.

"Man, she'd only 23, she's pregnant, she hasn't seen her parents in a couple years, her parents really don't approve of you, and well you pop the question a month after she finds out shes pregnant, it sounds like the only reason you asked her is because she's pregnant"

"Val, we've been together for 3 years now, I was gonna ask sooner or later and I guess her getting pregnant just sped up the process" he said as he gave a exhausted breath.

"I love her so much, I just want to make her happy" He said running his hands through his hair.

My Pov.

As I sat in the kitchen with Hannah, she made her and I tea. I hoped my talk with her helped. I couldn't let a relationship of 3 years go down the drain, especially since I hooked them up. I heard the front door open. I saw Hannah's face and whole body tense. I saw Val walk in, with Jon right behind him.

"hey" Jon said as he looked at the floor.

"hey" Hannah replied.

"were gonna be in the next room" I said grabbing Val's hand, leading him into the family room.

Jon's Pov

I just hoped and prayed Val was right. He talked me into coming back to the house, to at least talk things out with Hannah. When I walked in, she was wearing an old Hockey hoodie, and a pair of sweat pants, and to me, Still looked ever so beautiful. As I got closer I could smell her perfume, that I had a custom to for 3 years. Rebekah was sitting there with her sipping tea.

"Hey" I said.

"hey" She replied in a sweet tone.

"were gonna be in the next room" Bek said as she grabbed Val's hand and walked into the family room.

I stood there for awhile, until I finally had to break the silence.

"Hannah, why"
"why Jon? well its just convenient that you asked me to marry you a month after I find out I'm pregnant, and well it just seems like you just want to marry me because your child is in me"
"how could you say that. I love you, I would do anything to keep you, you know that" I said moving to where I was in front of her.

"I know, I just, its all happening so fast, and I'm scared" She said as the tears ran down her face.

I gently grazed my thumb to wipe the tears from her soft cheeks. "Babe scared of what" I said wrapping my hands around her waist.

"I'm scared, once we have this kid, a couple of years down the road your going to leave me for some prettier, skinnier girl, and then what will I do, go back to Canada, no, my parents already hate me for leaving and well I cant hear my dad say 'I told you so Hannah, that Ericsson boy was nothing but trouble'" She said as the tears continued to run down her face.
"Babe, I'll never leave you"

"that's what you say now"
"No, I will never leave you for some other girl, your my girl, my one and only"

She just held me close.

"so lets try this again"I said as I knelt on my knee.

She just looked at me,wiping the tears from her face, and smiling.

"Hannah Isabelle Franklin, Will you marry me" I said looking into her eyes.

She just smiled and then said "Yes"

Wednesday, July 21, 2010

6- I love you

This is the longest chapter I think Ive ever wrote. Please Comment. I hope everyone loves it
Well It had been a month since Val and I made it official, and it also had been month since Hannah found out her and Jon were pregnant. She had been putting off going to the doctor. Even when Jon and I urged her to go, she was still adjusting to the fact that in 9 months she would be a mom. That scared her to death. She didn't even tell her parents yet.


Finally I convinced her to go. On her terms. the only way she would go is if both Jon and I were there. So after a long day of practice Jon and I rushed our way to Bloomfield Hills, which was a little bit of a drive from Detroit.


As I drove, Jon sat in the passenger seat, fiddling with anything and everything. He kept changing the radio, which didn't bother me until he couldn't leave it anywhere.


"Jon Stop!"

"I know, sorry, I'm just really nervous"he said as he stared at his fingers

"I'm so scared I'm going to make a terrible dad, and i just want to make Hannah happy"

his sincerity was cute. Like me, Hannah had been through her fare share of jerks, and well if it wasn't for me hooking her up him back when he was a Griffin, she probably still be with her loser boyfriend.

"Jon, you will be fine, your gonna make a great dad.

"I can only hope, I mean I'm only 25. How many 25 year old men are dads"
"I know one"
"who"
"Jonathan Ericsson"
He smirked"Not funny"


"oh come on, I see you with Drapes and Malts kids, your great with them"

"Thanks"
"Jon seriously, your like my brother, which is kind a weird since I refer to Hannah as my sister"

He gave me a glare that would kill people"Don't ever say that again, that's my girlfriend, hopefully soon Fiance"

"so your going to propose"

"yeah, Ive got the ring and everything worked out" he said pulling this little blue box out, opening it so I can see.
I took one look, and it screamed Hannah. It was white gold. Princess cut, white diamond. The diamond was help together where the white gold bands came to meet. And on both sides had 4 diamonds going down the sides. It was unique, like Hannah.
"Oh My god Jon, its huge, Hannah's gonna love it"
"yeah, Hannah and I were down in Birmingham a while back and there was a jewelry shop, so we went it and she instantly fell in love with it" He said putting it back into his pocket.
"so I went back the moment she told me she might be pregnant to the place, and well I did anything to get that ring for her"
Jon wanted to make Hannah as happy as possible. By getting this ring, I think he accomplished his goal.
When we got the doctors office, there was one young girl that couldn't have been more than 18. I looked over at her, and she looked so scared. I felt like saying 'girl I know how you feel'. I keep staring at her. Jon went to see if Hannah has already gotten there. I just felt drawn to this girl, as I saw tear run down her face.
"hey, is everything all right"I said sitting next to her.
"yeah, thanks for asking" She said wiping the tear.
"does your parents know" I asked.
"no, just my boyfriend"
"how far along" I asked.
"I just found out"She said looking ashamed at her lap.
"I'm actually not for sure, I just came to see, I only took one test" she said wiping back another tear
"oh, well you might not be then"
"maybe"
"Beks" Jon called as he was headed back to were Hannah was.
"well I hope everything works out"
"Thanks"
As Jon and I opened the door, there sat Hannah with a very unhappy look on her face, with a sheet covering her bottom half. Her look could kill. I mean she was ready to rip mine and Jon's face off.
"what took you guys so long" She demanding a anwser.
"Sorry babe, traffic, and were sorry" He said as he gave her a lite kiss.
"I was getting dirty looks from one lady, thinking I was some kind of whore, I swear I was going to punch her"
Jon gave me this look. He looked like he was kind of scared. Hannah was always non violent. Even when we played hockey she was more focused on being a good puck handler. I was the one always being thrown into the box for fighting.
"Its the pregnancy talking" I said trying to sooth Jon's nerves.
"Hello" the doctor came in so happy. Which was a big contrast to Hannah's moodiness.
She was an older lady about the age of late forties.
"Hello Dr. Holan" Jon said getting up shaking her hand.
"Dr. Holan this is my boyfriend Jon, and you already know Rebekah"
"Yes, nice to meet you" She said as she grabbed for Hannah's chart. She looked it over, then came back up with a smile.
"well lets see if we can find a heart beat, and maybe get some pictures" She said as she squirted this jelly stuff on Hannah's stomach. As she moved it around, she formed a funny face.
"hmmm, I cant seem to find seem to find a heart beat" She said as she moved the wand around.
"WHAT!" Hannah yelled, stressed and scared. As She squeezed mine and Jon's hands, I could feel the circulation being cut off.
Dr. Holan moved it around it around and around, until we heard, this little thumping and beating. Instantly Hannah, relaxed, and laid back.
"170, wow" Dr. Holan.
"170, whats that mean, is it good"
"yes, very good, 170 is very high, and the higher of the heart beat you have now, the better chance you have at having a successful pregnancy" the doctor said as she pulled up some pictures.
"so how far along is she" Jon asked.
She examined the heart beat, and pictures."by the looks of it, I'd say she's about 10 weeks, so her due date will be August 27"
"oh, during training camp" Jon said trying to be happy about it.
"yeah, great" Hannah said breathing heavily, and stressed.
As we walked out of the room, I happen to look at the same girl that I had encountered in the waiting room. She was in the room next to us.
"Well Miss Lopes, your going to be a mom" I heard Dr. Holan say walking into the room.
'I guess she's not as lucky as me' I thought as I walked out.
I had promised Val I would come over, and we would order dinner, since I'm a terrible cook. As we laid in each others arms, I could feel Val's heart beat, it was so relaxed. As I flipped through the music channels on the TV. I came across the song "When a Man Loves a Women" by Michael Bolton. I instantly started laughing.
Val gave me a mystified look. "whats so funny" He asked as he stroked my arm.
"nothing, just, this song remind me of my parents" I said wiping the tears from my eye from laughing so hard.
"Really why"
"long story"
"I'm all ears to listen"
I tried to keep my laughter to a dull roar.
"OK when I was about the age of 10, my dad went out drinking with his buddies, and well he came home drunk"
"wow, your dad drunk" He said smirking.
"no it gets better, when he got home he blasted this song from the garage, so all the neighbors could hear, and was like "Maureen, come out her and dance with me""
Val tried to contain his laughter as I continued to tell the story.
"she refused, so he came inside the house, picked her up, and carried her out on his shoulder, and forced her to dance with him"
He just laughed at my story. I loved that story, because it reminded me my dad wasn't so uptight all the time.
"He to this day, wont admit he ever did that"
"well I wouldn't either"
I just looked into his eyes, as he continued to stroke my arms.
"wait here a minute" he said pushing me off him. He walked over to his Ipod speakers and turned on the song "With or Without you" by U2.
He walked over to me, giving me this eye. He held out his hand, just waiting for me to grab it. I was wondering what he was up too, so I just grabbed it. As he pulled me closer to him, I breathed him in. The smell of men's cologne lingered on his chest. It smelt so good. As we swayed to Bono's voice, there was no where else in the world I would have rather been. Val's hands held me close. I felt safe, felt secure. I closed my eyes listening to the music. Not wanting to do anything else.
"Rebekah"
"mhmm" I hummed not even moving to look at him
"I love you"
Wait, did he just say what I think. No man has ever said those words to me . I pulled away from his body to look in to his pacific ocean blue eyes.
"I..I love you too" I managed to stutter out.
As he leaned down the, the smell of his cologne was getting stronger. His lips gently grazed mine. The taste of red wine and strawberry's lingered on his lips. As I kissed back urgently and passionately, I could feel his strong hands moving up my shirt, as he pulled it over my head. I gently slipped his shirt up, but he had to pull it off, being I was to short, to get it over his long arms. We just stood there staring at each other. Taking in what each one of us were seeing.

Was this finally going to happen?
As I felt him pick me and push me against the wall, he left a trail of hot kisses from my neck, through the meeting of my breast, and all down my stomach. There he stood fumbling with my zipper of my jeans. As he helped me walked out of them, and instantly his hands were pulling me up. I could feel my legs slowly wrapping around his waist. He was hot to the touch. As he went on kissing, and nipping at my neck, marking me as his lover. He lowered me to the ground, and led me up the stairs to his bed.
When we reached the room, his hands were on my hips, pulling me closer. He continued to push me closer to the bed. Finally he lifted me off the ground gently placing me on the soft mattress. As I leaned off the bed, I playfully unzipped his jeans that fit him perfectly. His gaze met mine, as he stepped out of his jeans. I know he had been waiting a awhile for this night, and I wanted to make this amazing for him.
As he pushed me back on the bed, I laid waiting for him. As He slowly and painfully peeled my magenta lined with light pink lace thong down my legs. He looked at me like he was opening the best Christmas present he could ever get. As he kissed his way up my legs, up my stomach, between my breast, and up my neck, I could feel the want and need he had for me. as he slowly slipped my matching bra off my shoulders and threw it to the side, along with his boxers, I will never forget the smile he had on his face as he pulled the covers over us.
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As I laid cuddle up to Val stroking his chest, as he stroking my arm, he held me close. Tonight had been beyond my wildest dreams. It had blown my mind on how good it was. Ive never ever had someone tell me they loved me. It was always, I love your body. Val was different. With I had intimacy. Which is way better then plain old sex. As both of us laid there bare, neither one of us, wanted move. This moment was too great.
As I looked up at his face, as our gazes met, for the millionth time tonight.
"I love you Rebekah Babcock"
"I love you Valtteri Filppula" I said as I leaned up to kiss his soft lips.
As I leaned back I just looked in his eyes. I could tell he loved me.
Then of course my perfect moment was broken by my stupid phone. I knew it was Hannah, because it was her ring tone I set for her.
"hello" I said leaning over the bed
"hey Beks, guess what"
I thought, what could Hannah want at this hour.
"I don't know what?"
'Jon proposed"
I had totally forgotten that Jon was going to ask tonight.
"really, and what did you say"
She took a deep breath"I told him no"
Guys I promise this isnt the end of Hannah and Jon. I jsut want to add drama

Tuesday, July 6, 2010

5-A WHAAA!

VAls POV

All during the game, all I could think about was how the hell am I going to appoarch this problem. I knew Rebekah was going to cause some chaos and trouble in my life, but I had no idea it would be this much. I beagn to wonder if she was worth jeopardizing my career. But when i say her on the bus, and then when I held her in the trainers room, my doudts were automatically wiped away.

She was worth it. I knew this girl was worth it. Even though yeah she had her bagage, but Im a big man, I can carry that baggage for her. I was detremined to make her my official girlfriend.

The plane ride, I watched her. She stared out the window. She sat with the older group, with Ozzie, Drapes, and Malts. I could see the worry in her eyes. i knew she wasnt the same girl that she was back in highschool and college. i knew she wouldnt purposly do anything to hurt me or her family.

The plane ride was short. She drove her car, So i had to chase ger before she left.

"Val, not right now, my dad will see"
"you know what, I dont care"
"Well I do, I dont want him alreay madder then he is"
"Im sorry well Ill call you later"
"ok babe, I'll be at Hannah's so well you know"
I nodded "yes I understand"
"Ok Ill see you tommorrow" She said as she kissed my cheek and left.

But I had plans of my own. as I drove in my car, I was thinking how would word it. I was scared out of my mind. No on scared me more than this man here, well my dad, but her wasnt here so. But this mans scolling look just gave me the chills, and not how Rebekah gave me the chills, like Im going to shit my pants.

As I walked up the walk way to this house. My heart was pounding, and I my palms git all sweaty.

As I knocked on the dorr, I thought I still have enough time to run away. No No, if you truly want to make this right, you will over come your fear.

My POV

As I laid there in my bed. Val still hadnt called. I was getting worried. Val was usually a mna of his word, I was hoping he didnt do something stupid like I would do.

I just seem to go to sleep. So I did what I always do when I cant sleep. Eat. As I made my way down the huge stair case, I saw there was a light on. As I got closer I saw Jon sitting on a bar stool at the island in the kitchen, eating cookies and milk.

"well fancy meeting you here" he said.
"yeah I couldnt sleep"
"Did he not calll" he asked as he poured me a glass of milk.
'No, I feel like those girls you see, that are pathetic and wait by the phone, just waiting their boyfriend will cal"
"he laughed "no, Knowing Val, its fora good reason"
"so why are you down her" I asked
"Yeah, I couldnt sleep either"
"Why" i asked eating Hannah's delicious chocolate chip cookies.
"well Hannah, just told me that well I might be a dad"
My mouth dropped.
"Uh WHAAA"
"Thats what I said"
"Yeah she's two weeks late"
"well its just two weeks, so"
"yeah, she' taking a test tomorrow morning"
"well, wow, oh my god, she was drinking alot on New Years"
"yeah I thought too, but I guess she was drinking cokes, and Ice teas, and cranberry juice"
"wow, OH my God, I cant belive she didnt tell me"
"yeah were not proud of it, but things happen"
"wait i thought she was on the Pill"
"yeah she id, but she missed acouple of days so"
"Oh my god, so whats gonna happen if she is"
"well i guess no more partying and going to clubs, and we'll get married"
"wow, Oh my god, things are happening so fast"
"yeah tell me about It"
"so Wow" I said Holding my head, and my eyes practically bulgeing out of my head.

"yeah well so how are things with your dad"
I just gave him a look"
He winced "eww that bad" He said pouring another glass.
"No, well yeah, I just dont understand, I mean Val and I really like eachother, and I want to take things slow, I mean we havent even slept together"
He gave the look.
"You know I really didnt have to know that"
I laughed"Well, I mean Im a different person, cant my dad see that. I really Dont want to bring Val into all my drama. Frankly I really dont think Im worth all the trouble" I said as I ate my cookie

"Rebekah dont say that"
"why? its what I belive"
"yeah, But Val adores you, he would do anything for you, if that means dealing with you shit, then he'll do it"

I Just stared at the counter top.
"well all I know its late, and we have a long early practice, and we both need to get to bed" He said
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"OH MY GODDDDD!" I heard Hannah yell from down the hall. I instantly brought back what Jon had told me. I got up and ran down the hall, having to stop my self or I would have past the room. I stared into the rom looking at Hannah and tears streaming down her face, as Jon held her. Hannah was holding the stick. I slowly walked over and grabbed it from her hand. And forsure, Hannah was pregnant>

"what are we going to do" Hannah manged to get out from her weeping.
"babe well were going to be adults about this" Jon said.
The phone wrang, Jon rushed to anwser it.

"Rebekah, i cant do this, Im only 23"
I was a little shook up myslef, but I had to be strong for Hannah.
"Hun, your gonna be strong, I know your are. this baby is going to have all the love in world. From everyone, from you, from Jon, me, and all the guys on the team as well"
"you think" she said wiping her eyes.
"I know, and I'll be here the whole time"
"Thank you"
"what kind of friend would I be, id I wasnt here for you"
"a terrible one"
we both smiled.
'Oh my god, Im going to get so fat"
I laughed. Same old Hannah.

As I drove to the Joe, I was in so much shock of all the past days. As I took my place on the bench. I still dint see Val. I was kinda getting worried.
As practice began I saw Val with his smile on his face. It made me happy. i was no longer worried.
He skated over to me.
"hey babe"
"Hey, what happened last night"
"that why I came over here. I went over to your house yesterday, and well I talked to your dad ans well..."
"Filppula, just because shes your girlfriend, doesnt mean you can skip out on practice" My dad said

I looked at Val he had this grin on his face "He said yes"
I Instantly got up and kissed Val the hardest I ever.

"that doesnt mean you get to kiss her either" My dad said in a laughing under tone.

As Val skated away, a smile crepted over my face. As I looked at my dad, as he winked at me, then began with his normal before practice lecture.

at that moment, I felt finally my dad approved of my actions. My dad was finally happy with me. I felt this huge wieght lifted off my chest, as I sat there staring at my Boyfriend who was so kind, and so compassionate towards me. Could I find a better person for me.